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Desert Solitaire's avatar

You've already mentioned the lack of violence (except for that toward the end on Madagascar). The other thing that struck me as I read was the frequency of almost casual betrayals. Few people display either personal loyalty to their immediate leaders or a sense of obedience to the law or morality. I'm sure I will miss a few examples, but I'll sketch out a list:

1. On being assigned to his ship as first mate, Avery immediately begins to scheme to take over. He has no trouble finding several crew members willing to join his conspiracy.

2. When the conspirators execute their plan, the captain's only concern appears to be for his own personal safety, not to any higher duty.

3. It is not clear to me from the text why the Dutch captain Mynheer doesn't care to pursue them. So this may or may not belong on the list.

4. Only a handful of the crew decline the invitation to join the pirate band and get put ashore with the captain.

5. Avery tricks the crews of the two sloops out of their share of the Mughal treasure.

6. When the crew of Avery's final ship disperse in America, Avery conceals from them the bulk of the remaining treasure. (But in doing this he outwits himself, because he is left with jewels he can't easily convert to cash.)

7. Avery is cheated by the merchants who agree to fence his jewels.

8. Captain Tew appears to drift from privateer to outright pirate in a single paragraph.

9. Then we get into the remaining crew setting themselves up as petty kings in Madagascar (with emphasis on the "petty" part).

Except for the incident where the captain and loyal crew members are sent off in a boat (rather than killed), ever character seems completely amoral, looking only after his own immediate advantage. I get the impression that even the parties who were cheated would have done the same in reverse if they had had the cleverness or opportunity to do so.

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Brian Exelbierd's avatar

I was struck over and over again how it seemed that betraying your fellows was to be met with … meh. Even in the end Avery mostly just sends nasty letters to those who’ve swindled him. Granted he was older at that point and out of his element on land, but more force feels like it would have helped.

Even the pirates who form the Kingdoms are fickle mates first turning on each other and then banding back together.

It feels like the prerequisite to pirate hood is a love or tolerance for toxic relationships.

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